Sunday, February 24, 2008

Miss Dynamite 24: Screenplay

I think the screenplay is now good enough for the next step, the story board. Of course there's still place for changes and improvement. I'd like to hear opinions. Is it good, is it boring? I've added some fan service since the last draft. I cut some boring parts. Will Twiggy's origins be clear enough? Especialy for those who didn't read Faster, Dynamite. After reading your own jokes a couple of times, you lose perspective on what's good or not.
TL;DR version: Get fuck your face off!


Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love this!

Perhaps for a future thing you can have Eva and Blackie help ALF/ELF "Domestic Terrorists". I've said before and will say again, they'd be perfect. For the "media stereotype" of them, that is.

First, lots of "idealistic ivy league liberals on daddy's trust fund" ones, so lots of money to be paid to hire them to 'move a step up' in sabotage/evasion, etc.

Second, lots of hot young college kids with generally buff bodies and kinky tattoos and piercings. Blackie would be in pure heaven, teaching them martial arts all day and being in an orgy bed of women and men screwing her at night. Eva would be at the edge of explosion (as if she isn't anyways) listening to their idealistic attitudes. She'd be helping them 'free' animals at some meat packing plant wreaking havoc on the countryside with escaped animals, then she'd go to a McDonalds and eat burgers and tell her 'companions' she'll shoot them if she hears one more 'piece of bullshit'.

3:46 AM  
Anonymous Jezebel1669 said...

Any chance on some extra fan service when the girls are tied up at the Black Site? I can already picture Blackie's boobs propped up by the ropes. :P

4:35 PM  
Blogger Sirkowski said...

They were gonna be tied up in a more "Silence of the Lambs" Hannibal Lector kind of way. But bondage would be a nice idea. X-D

5:08 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is going to be cool! I can't weight to see it.:)


8:27 PM  
Blogger Ronymaru. said...

Esperaré hasta poder verlo o saber cuando se estrenará el filme. Saludos.

4:17 PM  
Blogger Sailor Scorpio said...

Sweet script. This will prove to be awesome as usual. =)

10:32 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like the script, any chance of Eva or Blackie kick that e-surance's lady's ass in the next one?

8:09 PM  
Blogger Sirkowski said...

We'll see.

10:22 PM  

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